#BlogBattle Week 11


Very nice story! I like!

How the Cookie Crumbles

Rachael Ritchey is the originator of this challenge

The prompt this week: …news…

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News

Susan hadn’t been away since her honeymoon twelve years before. Her excitement about the cruise roiled inside her like a pressure cooker ready to blow. There were so many details, concentrating wore her out.

“Harry, you printed the tickets, right?”

“Yes, I said I did.”

“And our passports?” She fumbled in their suitcase rechecking the contents yet again. “I made a list, but can’t find it. Have you seen it anywhere?”

“You worry too much. Come. I think you need a drink. “

“I’ll check on the twins first.  Scotch. Neat. See you in the living-room.”

Long-legged Harry reached her in one step and squeezed her elbow. Dark velvet eyes searched hers, luminous and gentle. Soot black curls hung over his forehead. “Two more days.”

She leaned into his lanky frame and…

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One comment

  1. Let's CUT the Crap! · May 26, 2015

    Thanks so much, Michael, for the re-blog. Glad you liked this and understood it.
    The heat sometimes helps beaten people react in way they couldn’t imagine. ❤ o_O

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